Poetry with Purpose: A Year 10’s Reflection on Character and Purpose

As a boys college, we are acutely aware of the challenges facing young men in today’s society and the importance of providing opportunities for reflection, self-expression and meaningful dialogue.

During our recent Poetry Day, our Head of English, Mrs Young, invited her Year 10 class to explore how Rudyard Kipling’s If might resonate with them as young men navigating the world around them.

Among a number of thoughtful and inspiring contributions, one that particularly stood out was the following poem by Jack in Year 10.

They tell me to do so many things and more, so I can be a good man of the lord.

They tell me to be composed, even when in front of my foes.

They tell me to not show greed, even when I am most in need.

They tell me to not show wrath, even once I’ve taken all I could have.

They tell me to not show lust, even when my body says I must.

They tell me to not show envy, even when I have immense jealously.

They tell me to not have gluttony, even though it is so easy.

They tell me to not show sloth, because it makes my performance fall off.

They tell me to not show pride, even when I win by margins wide.

They tell me to do so many things and more, so I can be a good man of the lord.

Jack’s poem offers a fascinating insight into the kind of young man he aspires to become. Drawing upon the Lasallian values that shape our community, he reflects on character, faith, self-discipline and personal responsibility with a maturity beyond his years. His willingness to look inwardly, consider the influences around him and articulate his aspirations so openly is both impressive and moving.

In a world where young people’s voices are often overlooked, Jack demonstrates the power of poetry as a vehicle for self-discovery, honesty and hope.

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